Lost in the Jungle chapter 2

[Moderator]

13:02, 12th Dec 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected (until updated)

 

[sPy]

Tested it...here's my comment:

The terrain has no problem, looks fine. No typos, but when I was watching it I felt it was kinda quiet, some ambient sound or music would be fine. And, stag dies = bone immediately? Perhaps you should make it play the death animation for a while before becoming a bone? Overall, no problem.

Edit: The cinematic looks kinda short in my opinion...

 

[aki15]

Tested it...here's my comment:

The terrain has no problem, looks fine. No typos, but when I was watching it I felt it was kinda quiet, some ambient sound or music would be fine. And, stag dies = bone immediately? Perhaps you should make it play the death animation for a while before becoming a bone? Overall, no problem.

Edit: The cinematic looks kinda short in my opinion...

Thanks for watching, i will add some music i think.
Fixed, stag animation !
-EDIT
Found a music just need to upload a map again !
-EDIT
Done !

 

[darkzxx]

no typos ? lol,

- Terrain is fine

- Music,there is a music but the volume is low,you can hardly hear it
- Boring Warcraft 3 Fight
- as i said in c1,you should blight some areas,then when the cinematic ends,you instantly move the camera there,then use text message to write "by aki15,next part coming soon"
- Cinematic too short,try to merge some parts,like after making part 3,save the map,go to sleep then tomorrow,work on part 4 then upload the map.
- i didn't pay attention to the cameras moving..so i do not know about this.
- minor typos,like the "i will find a food" change it to "i will find some food" there is one more,i forgotten.

 

[Ramza]

You should probably call them Chapter I and II, not version 1 and 2. It's confusing.

But I'll check it out soon.

 

[aki15]

You shall update the map, not reupload the map.
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/lost-jungle-v1-184472/

I updated it, not reuploaded...