Loading Screen Idea

[Kwanz4]

I am making a new version of a game called "Footmen vs Grunts", and this is the loading screen idea that I have:

What do you think of it?

 

[Nudl9]

Lets see, loadscreen doesnt make any sense whatsoever as it doesnt refer to any model or anything in the map and the title makes me want to wash my eyes.

Go try more before you come back, read a tut or sum shit and before you show off anything.

 

[MasterStryke]

cool, i like it, but the headline/title is shit... the style fits not and ... well nudl said it already

 

[Deolrin]

What does the image has to do with Footmen\Grunts?

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Can't you see he's a footman?

No, seriously, the text is awful, you need colour at the very least. I would also suggest a different font. The drawing should resemble the actual game, not just be cool.

 

[NFWar]

this is owesome ^^ test dont feet so well