Island River

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Island River
A terrain map made by David

About the map
This is a map that can be used only for cinematics!There is a huge river and islands in it!It comes from an underground watter cave.It goes to two direction's!There is a town!



WARNING:These screen shot's are old,I will take the new ones some other time ~~
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-v 1 uploaded-
-v 2:-
Changed the tree model,added pathing blocker's,added animated grass,smoothed the watter,made the center of the town different,deleted some houses and made some houses,made another river path instead of a freaking whole in the freaking side of the freaking underground watter place...Spent two freaking days...Damn it if it get's rejected...

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I used the Ultimate terraining map!So thank you all for the models!

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Island River (Map)

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Vengeancekael Date: 2012/Nov/18 00:00:14 [Please do not send me a message, use Staff Contact] Comment:Looks okay. You still need to add pathing blockers to trees and also to everything on the small islands to the west. Lower the bridges...

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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Nov/18 00:00:14
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Comment:
Looks okay.
You still need to add pathing blockers to trees and also to everything on the small islands to the west.
Lower the bridges you've placed as well, they're in the air.​
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Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Nov/10 23:38:19
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Comment:
Add more tile variation, especially in the top right part, too much grass.
The tree model does not fit, use a greener one. The buildings to the east of the map are placed badly (the ones next to the cathedral), a lot of them are under the ground (badly used the height tool) and you should place them in a better way, where do you see houses placed like that?
And fix the crypt in the graveyard, it's fixing the wrong way.
The village center where you've placed benches around 3 statues looks messy, make the area around the heightened area in the center flatter and replace the flower pots with benches or something else, perhaps fences at the outside and just more benches inside. And change the terrain tile below the statues.
You've also forgotten to place pathing blockers everywhere, buildings, the carriage, etc.
Also the building where the carriage is, put the 3 pavements higher so that they're not below the tile.
Make the water edges smoother.
And the big waterfall area at the north west is weird, 2 waterfalls coming out of opposite sides from a small hill? :p Doesn't make sense. I suggest you lengthen the back of the hill and just put one waterfall at the big river. (southern part)
Finally, I suggest more animated grass added all over the map, don't spam it though, animated grass can drastically drop the game's fps.​
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