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Vengeancekael 
Date: 2012/Nov/18 00:00:14
Comment:
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Rules
Date: 2012/Nov/18 00:00:14
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Comment:
Looks okay.
You still need to add pathing blockers to trees and also to everything on the small islands to the west.
Lower the bridges you've placed as well, they're in the air.
You still need to add pathing blockers to trees and also to everything on the small islands to the west.
Lower the bridges you've placed as well, they're in the air.
| Lacking |
Vengeancekael
Date: 2012/Nov/10 23:38:19
Comment:
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Rules
Date: 2012/Nov/10 23:38:19
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Comment:
Add more tile variation, especially in the top right part, too much grass.
The tree model does not fit, use a greener one. The buildings to the east of the map are placed badly (the ones next to the cathedral), a lot of them are under the ground (badly used the height tool) and you should place them in a better way, where do you see houses placed like that?
And fix the crypt in the graveyard, it's fixing the wrong way.
The village center where you've placed benches around 3 statues looks messy, make the area around the heightened area in the center flatter and replace the flower pots with benches or something else, perhaps fences at the outside and just more benches inside. And change the terrain tile below the statues.
You've also forgotten to place pathing blockers everywhere, buildings, the carriage, etc.
Also the building where the carriage is, put the 3 pavements higher so that they're not below the tile.
Make the water edges smoother.
And the big waterfall area at the north west is weird, 2 waterfalls coming out of opposite sides from a small hill?
Doesn't make sense. I suggest you lengthen the back of the hill and just put one waterfall at the big river. (southern part)
Finally, I suggest more animated grass added all over the map, don't spam it though, animated grass can drastically drop the game's fps.
The tree model does not fit, use a greener one. The buildings to the east of the map are placed badly (the ones next to the cathedral), a lot of them are under the ground (badly used the height tool) and you should place them in a better way, where do you see houses placed like that?
And fix the crypt in the graveyard, it's fixing the wrong way.
The village center where you've placed benches around 3 statues looks messy, make the area around the heightened area in the center flatter and replace the flower pots with benches or something else, perhaps fences at the outside and just more benches inside. And change the terrain tile below the statues.
You've also forgotten to place pathing blockers everywhere, buildings, the carriage, etc.
Also the building where the carriage is, put the 3 pavements higher so that they're not below the tile.
Make the water edges smoother.
And the big waterfall area at the north west is weird, 2 waterfalls coming out of opposite sides from a small hill?
Doesn't make sense. I suggest you lengthen the back of the hill and just put one waterfall at the big river. (southern part)Finally, I suggest more animated grass added all over the map, don't spam it though, animated grass can drastically drop the game's fps.
| Not Rated |
Yea...i liked the terrain and the map
