Input please

[Deleted member 177737]

Hey,

I'm currently working on a theme for my campaign (Dreamscape), so far I've finished a little bit of the opening though I'm eventually going to change some parts of it to make it sound better.

I just wanted to get some input on what other people think of the song, the quality is a bit reduced because I had to use fast rendering.

 

[WherewolfTherewolf]

Sounds pretty good so far, I love the atmosphere being set up
You should have the percussion sounds slowly build up as it's about to transition

Also when the key changes the instruments have a bit less verb to them then the other ones at the normal line, it makes it sound a bit hollow compared to the rest, you may want to raise the verb a bit there.

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Thx for the input Wherewolf, I've started adding a bit more around the area where the main tone changes. Heres what I have done so far, goin to sleep now. (I cant seem to get the beat sounding right for some reason though.)

 

[Alkonis]

The beat has a lot of weird syncopation that isn't in the melody.

I'm curious: what synth did you make this with?

 

[Deleted member 177737]

Frutyloops with all of the plugins.