ICON ADVICE PLEASE !!!!

[Nightmare_X]

It is my first icon: http://www.wc3sear.ch/?p=Icons&ID=11651
Please look at it and tell me if it's going in the right direction ![/url]

 

[ragingspeedhorn]

It is an okay icon, could use some work but it is much better than many of the other icons that gets submitted to the site