IceWorld

[Moderator]

06:43, 17th Mar 2014
Hell_Master: Map Awaiting Update and rated 2/5. See moderator's revew for more information:

Review emerges!

I had a look through in your template and I must say it,s a decent piece but needs some more little work to be approved.

The terrain is too much flat, I would suggest going to the Terrain Editor and using the tools: Raise/Lower/Smooth/Noise/Plateau tool into your advantage of playing with the ground's height, the terrain in most point is also empty, you only placed trees, cliffs and just that. You should place some doodads into it such as props, environmental doodads and etc., the way you used the blizzard cliffs seems fine, the terrain lacks tile variations and using thee Rocky Snow as the path is really unfitting. I would suggest Dark Dirt, Ice and etc. Do use some grasses as well in the terrain, plainly ice and snow is quite common now, and lastly, it's good you used weather but it might also be better if you'll use fogs for it: tutorial to add fog: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/all-about-fog-94771/ and etc.

Overall, it needs some work and this can be approved but for now 2/5 and Awaiting Update

 

[eubz]

You can use ctrl+pgdwn to lower doodads. Btw, I like the terrain well that's judging with the screenshots you have presented. (I am in my phone so I can't download yet. I'll do when I get back to my netbook.

 

[Daratrix]

:O thank you for the Ctrl+Pagedown I didn't know it before, I always asked myself how to pile doobads.
Hope you'll enjoy the map, some stuff are quiet crude or blank ^^' I'll use your tips for improve the map and update it in a few day

(Sorry for my bad English again)

 

[Binsu]

Review emerges!

I had a look through in your template and I must say it,s a decent piece but needs some more little work to be approved.

The terrain is too much flat, I would suggest going to the Terrain Editor and using the tools: Raise/Lower/Smooth/Noise/Plateau tool into your advantage of playing with the ground's height, the terrain in most point is also empty, you only placed trees, cliffs and just that. You should place some doodads into it such as props, environmental doodads and etc., the way you used the blizzard cliffs seems fine, the terrain lacks tile variations and using thee Rocky Snow as the path is really unfitting. I would suggest Dark Dirt, Ice and etc. Do use some grasses as well in the terrain, plainly ice and snow is quite common now, and lastly, it's good you used weather but it might also be better if you'll use fogs for it: tutorial to add fog: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/all-about-fog-94771/ and etc.

Overall, it needs some work and this can be approved but for now 2/5 and Awaiting Update