I need some criticism for this model i worked hard on already.

[OoPoweroO]

I do not mind if its an insault or bad or good criticism but I just need it so I can improve my model editing skills.




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Credits To Shadow1500 for his helmet
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[General Frank]

Well, I just see that you added the campaign screen helmet and the low poly frostmourne. The helmet is not made by you and it's a arrogance that you say that you made it. It's a shame.
The edits are too basic to be rated. You just changed the shoulder pads of Keal a bit (Just too basic) and add a helm, which is sitting really wrong on the head. Only geoset merging and saying it's a good model is just painful.
But just change up mapping, textures animation, add goodies and effects and your done.

 

[OoPoweroO]

Ok thankyou General Frank.

 

[General Frank]

Ok thankyou General Frank.

Not that was pure sarcasm of you.

 

[OoPoweroO]

That time i was not being sarcastic i am actully thanking you but if you don't wanne accept it then no need to, i don't mind.

 

[General Frank]

That time i was not being sarcastic i am actully thanking you but if you don't wanne accept it then no need to, i don't mind.

It's a good start. Just follow the hints I gave you and you're at it. And by the way, don't claim other peoples work.

 

[Elfsilver Lord]

And by the way, don't claim other peoples work.

Or better, don't even use their work in the first place.

I don't think it honestly matches. A silver helmet and sword don't match with red armor. The colors looks silly. Try using Geoset anims to change colors. (I believe you can do that with units, but I know you can do it with SFX. Correct me if wrong.)