HighElfArcher.blp

[Moderator]

22:58, 25th Jun 2008
Dan van Ohllus:
Although the concept is nice, but I there are things that you need to fix.
- Get rid of the nasty thick black lines on the skin. They look too cartoony and very messy.
- Face needs a lot more contrast.
- Highlight on the chest is very messy and needs better definition.
- The skin tone one the ears MUST match with the face skintone.

Edit:
[Rejected]
It's been a while it was on the pending state, and there are no updates.

 

[Deolrin]

This is inspired on AQ guardians... IM SURE.

 

[HeretoDLstuff]

I don't like all the thick black lines..

 

[Legrandray]

you think inspired of adventure quest ??

 

[FrIkY]

you need to sharpen this, it's too blurry and make black lines not so obvious, otherwise its a nice skin

 

[Deolrin]

Yea... the armor, look at a guardian in AQ:

 

[Legrandray]

i am just inspired =D but i let my imagination create some Differences

 

[Deolrin]

i didn't said its bad =D

 

[Legrandray]

i know, ^^

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

It's an OK skin, but I don't like the ears. For some reason, they don't look like they match the face. Otherwise, it's a fair skin. No real use for it though...

On a side note, Adventure Quest is a scam.

 

[Legrandray]

i never play it ...

 

[Deolrin]

I played it but this freaking sucks and DeadNerzhul is right...

 

[I)eadnerzhul]

I'm just saying. But keep up the good work!

4/5
-Ears are funny
-Armor is a little bit funny too
+Well done skin. KEEP UP THE WORK OR YOUR FIRED!

 

[Legrandray]

ty ^^ and i's right ad quest sucks ^^

 

[Zombie]

I'd say average.

The idea is overall good, but her pants look stupid this way.
The shading is pretty good.
I don't like the head.
The ears look funny on the screenshot, but it's not noticable in-game.

 

[terradont]

Halp! I think she's going to eat me!

Anyways, i think that the face needs more work, and the black lines is already covered earlier. That is the two main things i don't like about this. The chestplate looks more like a chestplate for a male character. Although the cape is nice. 2.5/5

 

[Hawkwing]

Positive Comments

[+] I like the general concept.
[+] Cool colour scheme, even if you got the idea from another game.

Negative Comments

[-] Much too defined.
[-] Ugly face.
[-] Skin tone dosen't much Ear Skin Tone.
[-] Highlights on the breastplate are messy.

Comments: It's way too defined. That's the main problem.

Overall Rating: 2.75/5

 

[Insaniac69]

Not fond of this skin.. Looks too cartoonish.

 

[Hawkwing]

Agreed.

 

[Zuma]

Face looks kinda funny