HeroPitlord.blp

[Moderator]

11:30, 22nd Mar 2009
Dan van Ohllus:
There's more need for freehand in this skin, because the recolored parts are almost taking the majority of the modification.
And the freehanded parts need shading and definition.

I suggest you take a look at the tutorials at this forum and in other places (wc3c, google, various art sites) so you can learn to improve your texturing knowledges.

I'm going to reject this.

 

[Leeroy]

The hands and the face suck. The rest is fine.

I think this is your first skin. Never upload your first skin.

But it isn't really bad. And you should count on comments of more expert people, such as THE_END and other skinners.

EDIT: Oh wait, it's bad. Not for a first skin, but that's really uggly, sorry.

 

[knight26]

head looks bad everything else is just so perfect man good work!
you used filters thats for sure but it still looks nice for my taste

 

[Agrias]

The rest of it is so not perfect lol. The head that is the ugliest part has the most freehand.

The entire skin from what I can see is a low opacity gray brush that's been splattered all over the purple parts of the pitlord. Doesn't even look bloody, good luck with future skins.

 

[JokeMaster]

Hmm Leeroy has right the hands and the head are total shit the rest....Looks fine

 

[Misha]

blurry, recolor, not enough freehand messy.... Dx
read some skining tutorials here on HIVE and then update this.

Rating: 1.45/5 Unacceptable.

~Misha~

 

[SILLYbear]

the chest armor, shoulder plates, and blade are quite nice (but maybe make the steelish edges of the blades matchthe color scheme)

edit: some stuff that might help improve:

the greysih part at the top of his head looks like a hood (see side-view). but it just doesnt look like it enough (in my opinion) from front-view perspective.maybe if you extend that grey matter more along the chest, the grey part will look like one big metal piece comprising the hood, etc, thus making the hood object apparent.

maybe get rid of the boots. they make him look like a prostitute. switch to hoofs + bracers around his legs maybe; make the bracers match the greyish armor stuff on him, maybe wiyth some runes of the color of his horns and the goldy stuff on his hanging chest plate.

 

[matmat01]

Something tells me it's kinda wrong and dull. maybe because your use of colors sucks. Pitlords are demons. not pink monsters.