Grammar Errors?

[lnfernal]

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A challenge has appeared, like a rock blocking your path
You will try to success, whether you cry or laugh
Though new problems you'll access, you will still eagering try
It will be hard, the solution won't be nearby
Your success is your reward, that's all you need
There will always be a goal, Failure or succeed
Something to reach for, using your soul

 

[Pharaoh_]

Α challenge has appeared, like a rock, blocking your path
You will try to succeed, whether you cry or not
Although new problems might come up, you will still be trying eagerly
It will be hard, the solution won't be that close
Your success is your reward, that is all you need
There will always be a goal, with failure or success,
something to reach for, using your own soul

Few changes made, nothing to change the meaning, but here it is, in an edited version.