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Ghost town [First terrain]

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So I see this place has a thriving community of terrainers.
Figured that I might as well post my first attempt in your business.

Not very good, I know, and it doesn't really have a background, but heck, I experimented with some techniques...

Enjoy.
 

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When I see it.. WoW! It's way better than my first terrain. =)
Add a moon and it's better. Anyway, good job! +rep
When you see it you World of Warcraft?

I like the atmosphere, but like you said, the lack of anything after the building is ugly. Try extending the view just to give us a little more to look at. Also some custom doodaded buildings would be nice (constructions if you know what that means).
 
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Could use a background but it's pretty nice. The use of fog is kinda bad, because it's very blotchy and kinda unrealistic. Those rocks in the foreground aren't exactly the best model, but if you really want to use them tint them a bit darker.

Note that I don't judge terrains based on whether they are your first or not, so expect hard critique from me ;)
 
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