First terrain ina year. Field_Home

[hawk_767]

Ok this is my first terrain in around a year since my Frozen Throne disk wouldn't work. This is also my first map that I used the ultimate terrain map, so criticism will be helpful. I know that the bright green doesn't really fit with the darker grass but I couldn't get the shrubs tinted right.

 

[redscores]

The Grass should NOT be brown... it looks dumb like this, make it more green.

 

[~Void~]

And make it shorter. Not smaller, just reduce the Z scaling on everything to about half.

 

[Belgarath]

If you looked, you can see it's Lordaeron Fall tileset. So the grass should be brown or orange.

 

[NinjasDontFight]

Something about that picture seems cool.



No people

 

[hawk_767]

Thanks for the tip void. and yes that is fall tileset so the grass is surposed to be brown. and thanks for the complement ninja

 

[~Void~]

Well if it's fall, make the trees have brownish leaves, make the whole thing a bit less sunny (cough cough fog cough) and get rid of the flowers.

 

[Gilles]

Why do you need the disk? TFT starts without it.

 

[redscores]

When it is fall, why are the flowers pure green? thats a bit stupid and just supports my comment. Thinking -> watching -> posting, damnit.

 

[Squiggy]

I think the house is too narrow..

 

[The_wand_mirror]

Make the grass more green and it looks cool!

Dejavu?

 

[hawk_767]

Ok not to be an ass or anything but i remember people on the Hive to be a lot more polite and respectful. I mean some of you are just pointing out the flaws and I acknowledge that but when your just blatantly saying it looks like shit this way change it? Maybe some of you should look at how some of the more respectful Hive members work with people and take lessons. people like umm Craka J? he was always helpful.
again not to be a dick but im just saying

 

[FrIkY]

Flowers don't match with the grass... you should either remove grass or flowers. And the fog would be nice.

 

[Oziris]

Like everyone said all ready,the grass should not be brown!

 

[Hawkwing]

Change the tint on the grass and make it appear less spammy, of course.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

this actually looks really nice...it has a warm feeling to it. The background and foreground blend in nicely.

here is helpful critisism to make it better

- the color of the grass iz okay, but im not sure, try this color
212 red
90 green
25 blue

i usually get good fall like results with these color combos

other than that it lookz great. i specially like the farm house... it has surprisingly good texture for a blowup unit ( converted to a doodad.)

 

[hawk_767]

thx hunter. but i used the color setting on the grass and didn't get much of a fall feel but more of the look of blood grass XD. I fiddle with the settings and got more of a fall look but then the color doesn't go well with the trees color. To change the leaves on the trees would I have to edit the skin of the model because changing the color setting also changes the bark as well.

 

[thedeathunterxx]

well i think he meant to use a different, more fall like tree model.

i think you should just change it to summer.

 

[Craka_J]

The brown grass would look a lot nicer and blend better with the surrounding terrain if you added a dark fog and a darker sky. Brown and blue don't mix very well. I'd suggest making the fog into a peach/tan colored fog maybe and use either the Generic sky or Blizzard (Fogs affect the Blizzard sky to change to the fogs color usually)

~Craka_J