FinalFantasy7MapTheBlackMateria, Whats Wrong Whit It

[djsep]

I got some complanes about my map FinalFantasy7MapTheBlackMateria.

Could somebody say whats wrong whit it, than maby i can make it Bether.

And Pliz Dont JUGGE me for it, this is my first map i have made!!

 

[qwerty]

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