Drawing made on school.

[Dr. House]

A drawing i made on school i would like to know what you people think of it.

 

[Kimbo]

Why is her torso floating from her pelvis to the left? o.0

 

[Dr. House]

a mistake i made i already fixed it but cant upload yet cause its on school sorry for that.

 

[M0rbid]

Ah, my man:-D
It's a nice drawing from what it looks like, but you need to take some time to work on line or scratch(?). And there are some physiological things to mention as well!
As a tip: next time do it with a pencil first, and then get the hard lines
But keep it up!

 

[Deleted member 157129]

Her shoulders are not aligned, her hips appear rather thin (but you might've fixed that already) and her left hand little finger ("pinkie") is RATHER large. Otherwise it's not all bad, just needs refinement.

 

[Dr. House]

yes i totally agree with you and som things are fixed but others are not cause if been so stupid to already make them hard lines or whatever its named.

 

[M0rbid]

That's not stupid!
It's experience:-D
Now you know that you shouldn't do it! And you' ll see your next pic will become much better if you try to focus on those tipps!
(another one: if you're drawing people, and there are people around you, take a look at them to get a feeling of proportion and anatomy, which isn't only important for realsitc drawings but also for comics and mangas!)

 

[Dr. House]

thanks for the tip i shall keep it in mind