Dimension of Strife Last Beta B

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Date: 17:34:26 25-Jul-12
Map Moderator: -Kobas-
Map Status: Rejected 1/5
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Rejection Reasons:
Map file has invalid author name!
Map has poor or no description!
Map is simple copy of another map!

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Comment: Map must have nice presentation.

 

[Cacciatore]

Comment and tutorial

Real download, here http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/maps-564/dos-1j-ai-221441/

 

[bhusta]

I don't think your map is approvable, in this state.

At first I list everything which is in connection with this forum:

• To write gameplay is like Dota is not sufficient. Look at other AoS maps and how their creators described them.
• created by Ragon Slear; uploaded by: Cacciatore
  This is not a problem necessarily but it can arise questions such as:
  “Is this your map?”
  “Do you have the permission to upload it?”
  etc.
• You write this map is unprotected but for what reason? It does not have to be a positive aspect.
• If you want this map to be approved improve your description! Your English skills seems to be limited, try to rework the text. Ask a friend or someone else to help you.
  Here is a tutorial you can use: link

Now I list everything which is in connection with before playing the map.

• Writing "map is working" won't help here because the map DOES NOT work, the file name is too long. Rename it like DoS_BetaA.
• An Halo 4 loading screen is nonsense. It just increases the file size.

At last I list everything which is in connection with the gameplay itself.

• Global experience is on, therefore the heroes gain experience by doing nothing.
• I perceived the imported sounds as annoying. You should change the killing sounds to trigger only if a hero dies.
• Hero descriptions are adequate but here is a tutorial you can use to improve them: link
• The terrain is not messy but not good, too.
  Look at this tutorial: link
• There is too much imported useless stuff that increase the file size.

Good luck with improving your map.

My rating 2/5 – 24 July 2012

 

[Cacciatore]

yes, its mine, lol
trust me, for the god name
me, Ragon or Cacciatore are same. You know

 

[Cacciatore]

this is the new one on my paste bin
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/pastebin.php?id=9htj85