DarkTrollTrapper.blp

[Moderator]

15:40, 2nd Sep 2008
Hawkwing:
[Rejected]
Unfortunately this is really lacking the 3D feel to it. Everything looks glued to the skin.

 

[FrIkY]

Well, it's a good start but it should have more work

3/5 - it's ok but try working on face

 

[Pyrotech]

Hmm... I'll try to... but most likely it wont work because:

Please note, the face wasn't modified
I just can't draw faces yet...

 

[Misha]

i see awful lot of filtes here u_u Filters are not alowed on THW
nice concept tho......

Tagged: 3.56/5 Nice

 

[Jack_Sparrow93]

It looks ok! 3.5/5

 

[Hawkwing]

i see awful lot of filtes here u_u Filters are not alowed on THW
nice concept tho......

Tagged: 3.56/5 Nice

Filters are aloud, actually. As long as there is at least 75% freehanded work corresponding with it.

I suppose pencil work is considered freehanded. That's an interesting way to do it.

I don't like the lines going horizontally across parts of the armor. Also, that shirt is too close to skin colour, make it black perhaps. It's lacking a troll theme to it, besides the shoulders and the armor dosen't feel very 3D.

My overall rating is a 2.8/5, just because the lack of 3D but I applaud you on the use of pencil.

 

[Grog50]

Hmm Thats an interesting way of doing a skin. If you added just a bit more shading and highlights this would be pretty good. Try working on faces =O

 

[goldenjuan1]

I think is good.... but still working on it.....