Approved
Moderator
M
Moderator
12:03, 25th Jun 2009
zombie2279: Very weird, random and simple. First of all, the object is not in focus. You will have to center it, or at least move it to the center to give room for better looks. Once you're done with that part, give the handle some details. It looks like a random black (or maybe dark-blue?) line simply drawn, without contrast, details or any signs of realism on it. Next issue: The effect. It's seriously not creative and very simply made, though it might look well with some more colors added and maybe the whole shape changed. The transparency is kinda good. The background is somewhat lacking aswell, I like the idea of using a glow around it, but it somehow makes the whole thing look weird, as if there was some sort of black wall behind the wand.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Very weird, random and simple. First of all, the object is not in focus. You will have to center it, or at least move it to the center to give room for better looks. Once you're done with that part, give the handle some details. It looks like a random black (or maybe dark-blue?) line simply drawn, without contrast, details or any signs of realism on it. Next issue: The effect. It's seriously not creative and very simply made, though it might look well with some more colors added and maybe the whole shape changed. The transparency is kinda good. The background is somewhat lacking aswell, I like the idea of using a glow around it, but it somehow makes the whole thing look weird, as if there was some sort of black wall behind the wand.
Rejected until updated.
sry for onfusing you :O
