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BTNSwordOfDarkMoon

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A sword, hammered from magic steel. Blade is formed mondly with golden clutch.

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Sword, Blade
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BTNSwordOfDarkMoon (Icon)

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01:11, 2nd Feb 2010 Pyramidhe@d: The flat white part on the sword blade, it shouldnt be like that. Better metallic qualities. 4 Feb 2010 Pyramidhe@d: No changes made
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01:11, 2nd Feb 2010
Pyramidhe@d: The flat white part on the sword blade, it shouldnt be like that. Better metallic qualities.

4 Feb 2010
Pyramidhe@d: No changes made
 
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Seas =)

Ahh finally a new icon here =) - so let's see what we got here:

First of all this icon contains a lot of work as I see and up to now I like it.

But in my opinion you can make the icon better:

1) I would somehow zoom in. So you can see all of the "Silver moon part" ( I don't know how this called in English ) The part between the "handle" and the "blade".

2) The name is: "Sword Of Dark Moon". So maybe you can add a small blue or dark-blue aura around the blade or the full blade. I think this will be a great hit.

3) You should add all important icon types: BTN ( normal - you got this ) but ATC ( attack ) and PAS ( passive ) + all DIS types

Yes this are my 3 main points, I think how to improve this icon. You don't need to release them - this just some ideas =)

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My comments are nothing against your work or against you <--- this are only ideas <- it's you work so you do what you want do. I will rate it in some days - because I want see if you change something or not. [Current Rating I would give is: 3/5

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Pyramidhe@d: This goes for all of your icons. Define them better, metals should have metallic texture and metallic highlights, gold should look like gold, not shiny orange colour. Some of your icons show pixelated edges and makes it look jagged when it should be smooth.
And stop posting any more icons until you improve the current ones.

i think... this mean u need to stop doing icons before others are better.
 
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okay ...
why are you posting tons of icons, when the others are not improved?
and please ... please to the gawdz! do not use google to translate your sentences! >.<
look there, this is what I mean:
A sword, hammered from magic steel. Blade is formed mondlich with golden clutch.
mondlich is a german word. are you german?
well anyway I don't think that mondlich is also right in german language. ;D
okay.
improve the icons, they all look good but need to be polished. :wink:
 
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