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15:36, 1st Oct 2009
Zombie.: As pointed out already, it's definitely not a sword fight, it's more like a kitchen knife fighting a pocket knife. The shapes are messed up, the details are wrong and lacking. Try to angle the handles' decoration to be fit with 3D and design the shading accordingly. The blades are really lacking, they totally miss both proper highlights and their shape doesn't resemble sharpness at all. Try enhancing the realism with more details and a better shading, don't forget to fix the DISBTN.
Rejected until updated.
Zombie.: As pointed out already, it's definitely not a sword fight, it's more like a kitchen knife fighting a pocket knife. The shapes are messed up, the details are wrong and lacking. Try to angle the handles' decoration to be fit with 3D and design the shading accordingly. The blades are really lacking, they totally miss both proper highlights and their shape doesn't resemble sharpness at all. Try enhancing the realism with more details and a better shading, don't forget to fix the DISBTN.
Rejected until updated.