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08:37, 19th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Too much blood is added, the color scheme is lacking and the whole concept is a bit too simple. Try either increasing the blade's size (maybe taking it off-screen) or de-creasing the handle. I'd recommend the first one, since it would look more detailed that way. Remove some of the blood effect and try to make the blade either grey and well-shaded or make the blood flow on it, it looks weird in its sprayed state. Any details you can come up with are welcome, don't forget the shading and fixing the DISBTN.
Rejected until updated.
zombie2279: Too much blood is added, the color scheme is lacking and the whole concept is a bit too simple. Try either increasing the blade's size (maybe taking it off-screen) or de-creasing the handle. I'd recommend the first one, since it would look more detailed that way. Remove some of the blood effect and try to make the blade either grey and well-shaded or make the blood flow on it, it looks weird in its sprayed state. Any details you can come up with are welcome, don't forget the shading and fixing the DISBTN.
Rejected until updated.