BTNShoulderPad

[Panda]

Can I see a big picture of this? Just clarifying.

 

[The Leader]

Can I see a big picture of this? Just clarifying.

Of course.

Spoiler: Pic first version

 

[Panda]

Instead of outlining in black maybe try a light brown or dark brown? Also, give it more curve, it needs to go on a shoulder so make it seem like its already on a human shoulder but it really isn't and make it curved that way. Clean up the black and white shading on the middle and bottom part of the shoulder metallic area, add some scratch's and sword marks making it seem like this has been through war. The bottom half of the shoulder throws me off a little bit, I keep thinking this is a gauntlet or metal gloves, so for the bottom half I would make it not so long and maybe add some designs/symbols on it.

 

[The Leader]

Instead of outlining in black maybe try a light brown or dark brown? Also, give it more curve, it needs to go on a shoulder so make it seem like its already on a human shoulder but it really isn't and make it curved that way. Clean up the black and white shading on the middle and bottom part of the shoulder metallic area, add some scratch's and sword marks making it seem like this has been through war. The bottom half of the shoulder throws me off a little bit, I keep thinking this is a gauntlet or metal gloves, so for the bottom half I would make it not so long and maybe add some designs/symbols on it.

Hmm, it'a actually a good idea ty, but i have redone icon, as i thought that this is too bad drawn, like i did with axe. I think that update is better than previous version.

 

[PrinceYaser]

Well, I think the first version was much better if you just do The Panda's suggestions. The shape of this version is a bit better. Maybe apply this shape for the first one. I think the first one was much more accurate. It doesn't look metallic now. Just my thoughts, I'm not a pro maybe my words are wrong or..

 

[Panda]

The thick black lines in the middle of the shoulder should be thinner and the shape needs reworked, please look at this example and go by that with shading and highlights. Example.

 

[The Leader]

The thick black lines in the middle of the shoulder should be thinner and the shape needs reworked, please look at this example and go by that with shading and highlights. Example.

And again i hurried and forgot about some details, or with other words it needs to be reworked, as you pointed. Today or tomorrow will be update.

 

[Panda]

And again i hurried and forgot about some details, or with other words it needs to be reworked, as you pointed. Today or tomorrow will be update.

Overall nice update, the shading needs to be smoothed alot better, right now it looks like waves of different hues of greys and blacks, smooth them out. Also, add some ribets towards the should pad that shows the welding process and hows it created like this photo.

 

[Panda]

[+] Enough changes provided, Could be useful.

 

[Doomcore]

Useful stuff.
Can I use it for a Mad Max themed faction?

 

[The Leader]

Useful stuff.
Can I use it for a Mad Max themed faction?

Yeah sure, you can use it. Don't forget to credit me.

 

[Doomcore]

Yeah sure, you can use it. Don't forget to credit me.

Okay Thanks.