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Sin'dorei300: I appreciate ur effort. Ur work's starting too look better and better. But there's still much to learn.
At first glance, it doesn't seems like a barrier shoulder. It looks a bit flat, i suggest u to improve shading/highlights.That barrier effect it's barely seen, try to zoom out a bit, to give it a chance. Also, the clarity of the image can be increased.
I suggest you to observe some shoulder icon/artwork(regarding clarity/definition/perspective).
11:21, 11th Oct 2015
Sin'dorei300: Nice update.
But a bit more contrast wouldn't hurt.