BTNSBFFBlade

[Moderator]

13:26, 23rd Nov 2008
Hawkwing: A tad too defined and the background is a bit overpowering of the blade.

Edit: Changes not made.

 

[Serbianbeast]

I made this one for this model: FF Blade - The Hive Workshop - A Warcraft III Modding Site

 

[TheBlooddancer]

You used CRAZY_RUSSIAN's Tutorial for this, didnt you?

 

[terradont]

It looks kinda odd with the black around the sword, atleast just half of the sword. It's also all to sudden(no fade) Try to make the whole background yellow and then fade it out to black towards the edges and you've got yourself one badass icon

 

[Serbianbeast]

Ye, I made it after CR's tutorial, I'll do that and see what I get terradont

edit: ye, it looks way better now

 

[terradont]

It looks better, but u forgot the black part near the hilt, and you need to fade it more. Look at the glow of wc3 weapon icons like searing blade and killmaim.

 

[TheBlooddancer]

Also, the hilt curves slightly towards left. Nothing big, just mentioned it.

 

[terradont]

That's it, looks alot better now.

 

[Nila]

I like it very much and i'll use it in my map!

 

[CRAZYRUSSIAN]

looks good, glad tutorial helps.

I don't like the yellow background so much. I think it would be best to darken the corners to dark orange red, so it looks more interesting than just yellow.

You can try that in your next Icon. I like the black lines around the sword, lines make the object look sharp. just make the lines lilbit thinner on the next one.

Also try to use different color for shadows, not just black.

Keep up.

 

[Serbianbeast]

Tnx for support, I'll start next one right away

edit: rejected? I've seen worse icons getting approved :S whatever