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02:20, 22nd Jul 2012
Apheraz Lucent: A great idea with bad execution.
The main item on the icon, the Satelite, should be bigger and with more quality work when it comes to shadows and coloration. Some details, such as signal glowing lamp on it would make it stand out.
The earth tends to look more cloudy when viewed from that distance, take a look at some images online. It could also benefit from some color variations.
I would make the stars brighter with white glow, while reducing their count to get it balanced. Right now, the idea of perspective is killing the icon.
Rejected until updated.
Apheraz Lucent: A great idea with bad execution.
The main item on the icon, the Satelite, should be bigger and with more quality work when it comes to shadows and coloration. Some details, such as signal glowing lamp on it would make it stand out.
The earth tends to look more cloudy when viewed from that distance, take a look at some images online. It could also benefit from some color variations.
I would make the stars brighter with white glow, while reducing their count to get it balanced. Right now, the idea of perspective is killing the icon.
Rejected until updated.