BTNRSummonWaterElementalImproved

[Moderator]

08:51, 3rd May 2009
Paladon: The upper part if the icon is okay, but please overwork the icon's bottom.
I'd suggest placing the eye in the icon's center, cut the bottom part away and add small parts over the eye.
Edit: Rejected until you made some changes.

 

[Billy the Cat]

Looks like a nice icon to me.

 

[GooS]

Looks nice, though i'd rather use it for Air Elemental since the first thing I though was clouds separating, forming an eye in between.

I've considered this icon to be one of my entries in the upcoming Phoenix Trial #5

Entries into a competition may not have been made before the contests start.

On a relate note, anyone knows when the next Phoenix Trial is on and what theme it will have?

 

[Zombie]

Quite good, altough I agree with GooS. Doesn't look like water. Also, I recommend fixing the Disabled buttons and removing those random lines from the waves.

 

[Paladon]

On a relate note, anyone knows when the next Phoenix Trial is on and what theme it will have?

I am currently in the preparations, make a post in this thread, i will post a link to the hosted contest there sometime soon:
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f233/phoenix-trial-5-submission-124180/
Just make a post in this thread, and you will be notificated there.
Otherwise, check the Arena: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/f226/

I know, this was "Offtopic", please excuse that.

Remember that you are not allowed to use any previous work in the contest.
Still, it appears a bit plain, mainly because it's all nearly the same colour.
Use a darker blue at the bottom, make it look more liquid.

 

[reza sword2]

Looks nice, though i'd rather use it for Air Elemental since the first thing I though was clouds separating, forming an eye in between.

Good point.

Entries into a competition may not have been made before the contests start.

Yeah I know, that's why I decided not to use it for the contest and just upload it it here. Hmm... it's going to be tough if you're entering.

Quite good, altough I agree with GooS. Doesn't look like water. Also, I recommend fixing the Disabled buttons and removing those random lines from the waves.

I'll try it.

Remember that you are not allowed to use any previous work in the contest.
Still, it appears a bit plain, mainly because it's all nearly the same colour.
Use a darker blue at the bottom, make it look more liquid.

Any suggestions on how?

 

[Paladon]

The upper part if the icon is okay, but please overwork the icon's bottom.
I'd suggest placing the eye in the icon's center, cut the bottom part away and add small parts over the eye.

 

[reza sword2]

The upper part if the icon is okay, but please overwork the icon's bottom.
I'd suggest placing the eye in the icon's center, cut the bottom part away and add small parts over the eye.

Yes sir. But please give me time. I'm really busy with school at the moment.

 

[Paladon]

No problem.

 

[Vordik]

Looks scary. Exactly what needed. 5/5