BTNPowerSword

[Moderator]

23:13, 26th May 2010
enjoy: You need to define it more, more details, and stronger highlights and shading. Also it is pretty plain and flat, so you should looks at some realism tutorials. Rejected until updated.

09:15, 20th May 2010
enjoy: The shape still needs fixing. Try to look at some swords around the net to get ideas on the shape. Remember NOT to trace, but getting ideas is allowed.

22:21, 31th May 2010
enjoy: I think you should try over.

 

[Citatus Nim Totren]

http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/members/180893-albums3349-picture29883.html
This is the full size Image

 

[asailant]

More detail

 

[chilla_killa]

Not bad for the start.
But I would add some thin black lines for defining it a bit more and add more details.

 

[Citatus Nim Totren]

Thanks for the tips.

 

[Panda]

The blue in the background is weird, also the sword doesn't look sharp at all, yet waxy, and the shape of the blade itself needs some work also. Fix these things.

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

The colours are bit flat