BTNPoisonArrow3

[Moderator]

09:20, 10th Aug 2009
zombie2279: Overall very very simple. Lacks definition, proper details and highlights, it looks like a gray blob with a brown blob added. I recommend a complete reworking, starting with the shape, make the arrowhead sharp and realistic, then use highlights when coloring the metal parts. The glow won't be needed then.

Rejected until updated.

 

[The Panda]

Review,
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1.Looks a bit like a feather than a arrow.
2.If your going for an arrow, you might wanna make a long thick handle* part and then have the Grey part on your icon as the tip* But, in this one it seems the handle part* is very small. Increase the size of the handle and re-work the tip part a bit.
3.The poison needs some work also, try to make splotches or drips of poison coming from the arrow or on the arrow.
4.Details towards the arrows tip is important too, Make the shading seem like its rounded or 3-Dish, and add some color variation that would look like steel or metal for a tip of a regular arrow.
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(All my recommendations to your icon, you can choose to use these or not, your choice.)
Thanks, Army-of-pandas.

 

[Latecat]

Same thing with a icon wich was uploaded before - it looks more like a spear than arrow.
Fix this.
3/5.

 

[Darkness568]

Thank you. I have updated the blps. The changes and things i cant figure out are in the first post.

 

[The Panda]

What im basicly saying it change the whole object and definition of the whole icon. I mean too change the overall look, make the arrow more like and arrow and make the details better. As said before, everything needs to be worked on as so. As of now the arrows tip is too big, and the handle of the arrow seems too be crooked, straighten the handle a bit and make the tip smaller. As of the poison, make it either dripping or on the arrow itself. If that doesn't help, please tell me.

 

[breebree123]

hmmm
the arrow is not straight, arrow not in shape, needs more shadings
3/5

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Well, it needs more shading. The wooden stuff could be more middle, it looks like it's broken or something.

 

[Squidle]

It's... bit misformed.
And blizzard made already something like this.
It's called "Envemoned Weapons".
I don't think this will be very usefull...