BTNNatureMagicDagger

[Moderator]

15:15, 18th Oct 2009
Pyramidhe@d: well the leaves are little undefined to be recognised as leaves. maybe put some bigger leaves among the small leaves.
variation=natural=good

 

[Dentothor]

Im not sure what you've done here. but really. this is all solid colour. i see no shading or highlights ANYWHERE.

The shape is decently done. i like it. but try to make it a bit longer so it doesn't look like a butterknife. The poison i am most disapointed with. it looks like to took the small galaxy brush and scribbled around it with a green colour. which does NOT look good at all.

Lastly, im seeing this as a very boring icon. mostly because the BG is one colour. fix that. but on the good side, its not distracting from the main object.

2/5 Keep Trying.

~Dentothor

 

[Soul Theft]

this is nice

 

[wohuynia]

now ima fix shading around blade, cant do that on the handle, atleast darkening, cuz BG is black, only light shading, adding more details to "poison" xD

EDITED: added more shading, lil bit of BG and a bit more details on "poison" xD

 

[X-OMG-X]

Wtf this is awesome! If you add a little more shading on the 'poison', it will be much more awesome! Good job here. 5/5.

 

[wohuynia]

Well updated for the last time, i hope, added green tint on the BG, added more poison, not to much, cuz it would b more like "BTNpoison cloud with a lilbit of dagger in it"

added small ity bitty lens flare on the blade, that it would look cooler and plus i like adding flares lol xD

hope u like it xD

 

[Dentothor]

it looks even messyer than before.

 

[Wraithling]

I'm looking for some poison themed weapons and you conveniently provided me this Interesting.

I've only 2 observations. 1- the stuff around the dagger? Don't look like poison, more like green pixie dust or green rust. A little work here would be nice. 2- I want to see more of the blade, and right now I think you've obscured it too much with the pixie dust. Show a little more of the blade and hilt, and I'll definitely download and use it.

4/5 as of now :]

 

[TheHunterKiller]

That green poison doesn't look like poison. Also more shading to the blade.

 

[The Panda]

The poison looks like grassy leafs of some-kind make it more drippy or like liquid.

 

[wohuynia]

can i just rename it to nature magic dagger??? xD

 

[enjoy]

Could need some more shading and highlights. Doesn't really look like poison around the blade, but more like, some kind of plant?

 

[wohuynia]

so renaming it is xD cant realy work on shading, forgot to do backup with layers, now i have only merged form of this icon, that i cant really do much with it, so i just have to leave it like this " a bit of a screw up " icon.

 

[Dentothor]

if your not going to improve it, its going to get rejected.

 

[wohuynia]

well renamed it, added as much shadows, highlights as possible , added FEW details and i hope no more complains about the poison that doesn't exist any more now its nature magic xD

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

well the leaves are little undefined to be recognised as leaves. maybe put some bigger leaves among the small leaves

 

[Pyramidhe@d]

well the leaves are little undefined to be recognised as leaves. maybe put some bigger leaves among the small leaves.
variation=natural=good