BTNMarksmanship

[Moderator]

15:30, 10th Aug 2012
Apheraz Lucent: Very harsh lines you got there. The apple really needs stronger division of parts, not to mention a better rotation angle, as it's not seeable what it really is. Same goes for the arrow, which also looks blunt and 2D. Some effects, like splashing juice and wind traces would remove the static feeling.

Status set to Pending Update.

 

[I3lackDeath]

Neat, but fix the arrow shape/texture. It looks like a taco chip/shovel. Also, show more of the apple in the background (apple core!) to make it look like an actual apple.

 

[JollyD]

Neat, but fix the arrow shape/texture. It looks like a taco chip/shovel. Also, show more of the apple in the background (apple core!) to make it look like an actual apple.

Thank you for the review, will fix when have some inspiration to do that )

 

[Narandza]

Can't see whats on the picture, after I saw the wc2 version, I could but...

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Nice, but is a bit overcontrasted.

 

[Hemske]

Nice idea. You should change some angles and define it more though. It is kind of hard to make out what it is. Also, it does not look like the arrow is flying.

 

[The Panda]

Yes, i cant see the apple nor the arrow, when i saw the icon for the first time i saw nothing, then i saw the icon in the description and i noticed what it was. Work on definition and the right amount of shading and highlighting.