BTNManaLightStrike

[Moderator]

02:02, 3rd Dec 2015
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

 

[Eagle XI]

Reminds of Ion Cannon somewhat, nice

 

[Da Beast]

Awesome!! You Are Definitely Improving!!
Keep Up the Good Work!
5/5

 

[Panda]

Not really liking the swirly lines around the beam itself, also when the beam hits the ground should give off a bigger blast than that, add more rocks flying or a different color blue aura flying since its a "mana" beam.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Too simple, monotone and flat, this icon could use more creativity.
It's stylized in a kinda simplistic way, try experimenting more on it.
Also, it lacks definition and dynamism.
I suggest u to add some details, color variation, shading, to work more accurately.
Try to make more interesting compositions.
But, in order to succeed, u have to practice more.
Here u can find sufficient material that might help u:
2D Art Tutorials, Art Tutorials/Books/etc.