BTNLurtz

[Moderator]

23:30, 9th Jun 2010
enjoy: useful

 

[chilla_killa]

I hope you like my first Icon.

 

[Hawk]

Awesome background! ^^

 

[Etzer]

Is this a screenshot with a background? Because the teeth are REALLY stretched.

 

[chilla_killa]

They aren't stretched

 

[NFWar]

As I sayed, it need more work. You mised some details that makes it better than screenshot and those are fixable easy. I am not talking about shadings, but about shape.

1) One eye looks off from side because of wrap of model. Not hard to delete it and place your own.
2)Area above nose was too piched in, smudge it a bit and it looks better.
3)Lip must be defined because it is above uper jaw
4)More defining of lip by darkening blurry line of model skin
5)Big teeths are too plain. Smudge to give better shape.
6) Cmon... hair is not so liniar... model have this not icon :/ Smudge hair then
7) Shape of head, from right side where most fire is, is too liniar. Give it better geometry.

I wasnt talking about shading But icon culd be better IF it wuld have some.
I am not trying to get you out from iconing... hell no. I am trying to explain some things and help you.

 

[Etzer]

Well the whole upper lip area looks stretched.

 

[chilla_killa]

Thanks NFWar,
I fixed those parts.

 

[The Panda]

Looks fantastic!

 

[chilla_killa]

Thanks a lot!

 

[Khaled]

One more thing, DEMIGOD did NOT created the model, Red Shift made it

 

[Hawk]

I edited something -.-.Because i edited some small parts that will Red Shift owner...

 

[GhostThruster]

Um, Khaled, I know you're trying to discredit and annoy DEMIGOD, but it was actually Blizzard who made the model, DEMIGOD who edited it, and Red Shift who made the initial skin.

Nice job for a 1st icon. Please define the upper lip.

 

[Zegaroth]

Where did he/you get that user interface?