BTNLightning4

[Moderator]

13:16, 24th Oct 2014
Sin'dorei300: It shows an improvement compared to the first variant. But it seems that u haven't watched carefully enough those tutorials that i've recommended to u.
Also, u could take a look at some real photos of lightning, it might help/inspire u.
Regarding the execution, the icon looks like a WIP.
All of the lines are about the same thickness, the same color, are too many and look somewhat unnatural.
U could use a wider range of colors to break the monotony and the execution should be smoother.

17:41, 3rd Nov 2014
Sin'dorei300: Awaiting update!

 

[Minder]

Big pic:

 

[Razosh]

I like but I've never seen a lightning that is just a straight pillar they most along the way separate and smaller pillars split of like in this image.

Lightning

Other than that I think it looks extremely nice.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Don't credit me, there's no need to credit someone for giving links.
Also, maybe u wanted to write lightning.

 

[Minder]

I like but I've never seen a lightning that is just a straight pillar they most along the way separate and smaller pillars split of like in this image.

Lightning

Other than that I think it looks extremely nice.

I am working on the smaller pillars but no good results so far. I will keep trying.

 

[Razosh]

Well keep trying and I know you'll get there eventually.

 

[Minder]

Is this better? If it is better I'll update it.

 

[Razosh]

It could maybe be made to look a little better by making them thinner than the main lightning pillar by either making the main thicker or the minor thinner but it's in my opinion a good improvement.

 

[Kingluis]

add more light around the lightning bolts

 

[Minder]

add more light around the lightning bolts

maybe when I get home.

Updated!

 

[Panda]

I agree with the posts above, just needs some minor updates on the lighting itself.

 

[Heinvers]

Looks nice for a first

It could maybe be made to look a little better by making them thinner than the main lightning pillar by either making the main thicker or the minor thinner but it's in my opinion a good improvement.

This ^

 

[Minder]

They are thinner. Press control+F5 to see changes.

 

[Razosh]

It looks great, really good work, I personally can't think of anymore big improvements that could be made.

 

[Heinvers]

Well then, voting for approval

 

[Minder]

Thanks!

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Much better, but for an even better result can u still make small improvements, ex.:

->

 

[Minder]

Will not update yet, what should I improve?, or was the old one better?

 

[Sin'dorei300]

U kinda overdone it.
All it needs is to add some darker areas and reduce the blurriness a bit, as i have shown in the examples.
U shouldn't change anything else.

 

[TheDarkWay]

Very cool icon i love it man keep the good work

 

[Fang]

I can use this in the project!
This is good!

 

[Eat_Bacon_Daily]

Wow, this is really nice! I'm surprised it isn't approved