BTNLethalBite

[Moderator]

18:02, 11th Nov 2010
enjoy: Useful.

 

[Mainy]

Enjoy.

 

[qwerty8]

I don't know icons very well , hows they're design etc

But I think it looks like rather 2 Armas with 3 Claws on each just "hugging" air. Rather than a mouth bite.

 

[AlienAtSystem]

The upper and lower jaws are parallel, making it diffucult to imagine how this mouth can close, you should angle them. It also looks kind of unrealistic because the mouth hole ist just pain dark. With just a subtle hint of the other teeth and a tongue, it would look better.
And as a last, but more difficult point to fix: To get the teeth in and out of the vitim, the teeth are normally bended in a way that they follow concentrical circles around the jaw hinge. Your teeth are much too croocked (look at the first upper one - its bending center is inside the tooth space, but as mentioned before, the hinge is actually very far away.)

 

[Mainy]

Updated.

 

[FriendlyHost]

looks weak and amateurish, 6/10

 

[Mainy]

looks weak and amateurish, 6/10

I do not take into account comments without foundation ... Before criticizing should indicate the points that need improvement.
Also I think the icon is not so bad, or whether it would not be approved.
Should do as AlienAtSystem argued that the parts that needed to be improved, and indicated how.

Your comment seems it is only to increase the number of posts....

 

[darkdeathknight]

It doesn't seem to be overly useful in my opinion, as there are many icons showing a bite or eating.
But as to the actual icon itself, the teeth could have more variety, like molars etc, and the "beast" seems to have no lips, as the icon only shows gums,