BTNHook5

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02:46, 10th Apr 2016
Sin'dorei300: Commented.

22:29, 18th Apr 2016
Sin'dorei300: It would be nice to see some improvements. Awaiting update.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Zoom it in. There is a lot of unused space, just black bg.
Atm it looks too simple and flat.
For an acceptable outcome you need to put some more effort into it.
I'm waiting for an update.

 

[Sin'dorei300]

I suggest to keep just one worm(the yellowish one, for example).
Try to draw a texture on the hook and increase definition of the whole thing.
Make the blood more visible. Better draw just few large blood drops seeping, than many droplets spurting out of the worm.
Also, i think you could experiment(try) with the hook's position a little(maybe rotate it a bit and zoom it in more, if possible) to reduce the unused space even more.