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11:41, 8th Jan 2011
Pyramidhe@d: The red bit in the middle, not quite clear what is going on in there. As well as the top bit on the end of the sword. I think you were trying to put a saw kind of stuff but it just looks messy. Fix all the edges around the sword so they dont look so jagged/pixelated.
Also, the pole, it looks like a handle. It doesn't really convey to me that it is a pole rather than a handle as it looks right now. This is pretty minor, but the thing with the blade is important.
Pyramidhe@d: The red bit in the middle, not quite clear what is going on in there. As well as the top bit on the end of the sword. I think you were trying to put a saw kind of stuff but it just looks messy. Fix all the edges around the sword so they dont look so jagged/pixelated.
Also, the pole, it looks like a handle. It doesn't really convey to me that it is a pole rather than a handle as it looks right now. This is pretty minor, but the thing with the blade is important.