BTNgreenray3

[Moderator]

17:08, 17th Oct 2009
enjoy: This is way too simple.

 

[pippo]

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[TheHunterKiller]

A bit blurry, and i think you should put the ray on the middle. It's pretty good though.

 

[Revolve]

Looks okay, but you should put it in the center/focus of the image.

 

[The Panda]

Nice details but, it seems to be too simple. Add some more effects and details to background or the beam maybe some stars or lights.

 

[Tortured Souls]

i like it

 

[pippo]

Nice details but, it seems to be too simple. Add some more effects and details to background or the beam maybe some stars or lights.

Great idea...at the next upload will do all the advices

EDIT: Updated

 

[kola]

maybe add some colors that fit with the green...

 

[Dentothor]

It really is a tad blurry. you should fix this. Try separating the colours of the ray by making the swirl around the ray brighter than the blast itself. and try to thin out the blast a little. bit.

Also, make a more creative BG, it ruins the icon and makes it look a bit childish.

2/5

~Dentothor

 

[Revolve]

Looks very nice, but can still be improved.
Ty changing the glow around the ray abit. Right now, the glow is a bit above the ray in the end. Lower it abit so it matches the ray, and perhaps thin the end out, so it looks like a beam-ball thingy that gets bigger.

 

[pippo]

It really is a tad blurry. you should fix this. Try separating the colours of the ray by making the swirl around the ray brighter than the blast itself. and try to thin out the blast a little. bit.

Also, make a more creative BG, it ruins the icon and makes it look a bit childish.

2/5

~Dentothor

Hmm...I didn't understand it all...however i will try to make it better, be sure...

Edit: Updated

 

[Dentothor]

the blast looks a lot better but that BG still messes me up.

3/5.

 

[pippo]

the blast looks a lot better but that BG still messes me up.

3/5.

And how do I fix that?

 

[Deolrin]

Nice, your best one so far.

5/5, because it's much better than your others.