BTNGDElectroWhip

[Moderator]

19:03, 6th Dec 2014
Sin'dorei300: Commented.
Awaiting update.

 

[Minder]

The lightning of this looks like blue-glowing branches of a tree (I am not pretnding to offend you, sorry if I am), I think it needs more work. As for the shape, it is quite good, I like it.

 

[Moy]

I agree with Minder

 

[Golden-Drake]

so i need to warp the lightning around the whip insted of making it sparcle out that much?

 

[Moy]

It looked like roots just fix the lightning :3

 

[Heinvers]

so i need to warp the lightning around the whip insted of making it sparcle out that much?

Pretty much, also try making the electrical parts a bit white-ish.

 

[Panda]

Looks too small, zoom into the whip itself making an ankle sorta like this. Also, it is quite blurry at the moment i would try to make it sharper too the eye. Lastly you don't need a lot of random lightning bolts in random places, i would just stick with lighting going around the whip itself instead of jolting off in random places. And, i see brown spots in the lighting also, not sure what they are.

 

[Golden-Drake]

Updated (didn't see your post panda - but i might think into it if you think it is still a problem)

 

[Sin'dorei300]

Try to use some more vibrant colors for those lightning.
And, by the way, Gimp(gimp-2.6.11-i686-setup-1.exe) is free and it's easy to learn.

 

[Panda]

[~] New Icon Rules, this icon seems to be useful enough for approval considering old review.