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Sin'dorei300: I'm glad that u want to make icons, but for this u must read tutorials, learn and practice.
Atm it doesn't look like a whip at all, it's too thick & short, it lacks texture and the flames need to be improved a lot.
The shape also needs a lot of improvement.
In one word, it needs more work.
20:49, 25th Oct 2014
Sin'dorei300: First of all, in order to draw all those details that have been suggested, u should use another format.
On 64x64 canvas, i doubt that u can succeed to put in value the whip's texture and flame details.
I picture a burning/flaming whip dancing on almost the entire surface of the icon, undulating flames leaving behind smoke, shouldn't be so much unused space.
Your whip looks more static than in motion.
The whip is long, we couldn't capture the entire whip and its details to remain visible enough, and yet in ur icon remains sufficient unused space.