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[Moderator]

14:35, 26th May 2009
zombie2279: Way too simple, you ought to be capable of more. The object, the shading, the effect and the lightnings need vast amounts of work.

Rejected until sufficient changes are made.

 

[Fire and Ice]

Alright this needs a lot of work. Firstly, make the outline of the handle sharper and make some changes to its design so it looks more conventional (this is optional). Next, set the proportion between blade and handle to something more realistic. At present the blade's a little too large. In addition, the blade is missing the reflected glow of the fire and in its current state looks more like a lump of clay. Sharpen the outline of the blade as well, and add a little glow to it. Lastly, the flames don't look like fire. I think you could use some of the other icons in the Hive as reference in drawing.
Thats about all. 2/5 as it is now, but I'll rate after changes.

 

[Ken Christopher]

Wow, thank you. I will make changes as soon as possible.

 

[Fire and Ice]

You're welcome once again. The least a corpse can do is to be of some use to others instead of just lying there and rotting away.

 

[Ken Christopher]

Yeah,thanks. Will make changes as soon as possible. Comments and feedbacks can help improving my skills.

 

[Fire and Ice]

Take your time. I emphasize on quality more than quantity. You should see the way I design guns.