BTNFireBall4

[Moderator]

16:09, 19th Oct 2009
Pyramidhe@d: the middle yellow i think can be much brighter

 

[Dentothor]

This more or less looks like messy lines in a shape that could somewhat resemble a fireball.
there is really something about this that i really dont like. it is mostly the fact that it looks very unlike fire. Fire isnt liney or scratchy like you had portrayed in this icon here, but it is a smooth soft powerful flame.

there is also too much flat. this doesn't look rounded off to be properly 3D. try adding some shading and highlights (around the edges possibly) to make it pop out.

You should also fix up the BG. the colour matches the icon, but it looks way random and scratchy like the fireball, and it could turn out so much better.

2/5 Keep Trying

~Dentothor

 

[Orthon]

It's flat and doesn't look like a fire ball. Also there already is fire ball made by blizzard

 

[Santa_Claus.]

I love it.

 

[X-OMG-X]

I like it. Yea there is a fire ball by blizzard but this is much better than blizzards. Ofc it needs to be improved, but i like it.

 

[pippo]

This more or less looks like messy lines in a shape that could somewhat resemble a fireball.
there is really something about this that i really dont like. it is mostly the fact that it looks very unlike fire. Fire isnt liney or scratchy like you had portrayed in this icon here, but it is a smooth soft powerful flame.

there is also too much flat. this doesn't look rounded off to be properly 3D. try adding some shading and highlights (around the edges possibly) to make it pop out.

You should also fix up the BG. the colour matches the icon, but it looks way random and scratchy like the fireball, and it could turn out so much better.

2/5 Keep Trying

~Dentothor

Updated man...more advices?

 

[pippo]

Fullsize image

Fullsize image before

 

[Dentothor]

you definatley made it more 3D, but its still a tad scratchy. looks more like a chicken drumstick. . and why did you remove the BG instead of changing it? it looks worse without it.

And do not double post. use the edit function instead.

 

[pippo]

you definatley made it more 3D, but its still a tad scratchy. looks more like a chicken drumstick. . and why did you remove the BG instead of changing it? it looks worse without it.

And do not double post. use the edit function instead.

Ok, sorry, but what is the "BG"? Back Ground?

If it is, I really don't know how to make it well...

 

[Dmazzz]

.... looks more like a chicken drumstick....

Omg Thats so Funny + Rep to both^^

 

[enjoy]

Maybe blend it out alittle. Also more yellowish in the fireball, I think.
3/5

 

[pippo]

Maybe blend it out alittle. Also more yellowish in the fireball, I think.
3/5

Hmmm...But i like the colors as they are... :/

Anyway I will do it more "oranger" soon...

 

[pippo]

Updated... Is it ready for approve?

 

[Dentothor]

dude. stop double posting.

 

[X-OMG-X]

Wow nice update you made. It looks fantastic now. I think it will match one of the spells in my rpg. Thanks alot for this pippo

 

[pippo]

Wow nice update you made. It looks fantastic now. I think it will match one of the spells in my rpg. Thanks alot for this pippo

Thank you not me

 

[Dentothor]

It now looks like a chikin leg of fire. XD

but srsly, its a really great update. Much better than when it started.

3/5

~Dentothor

 

[pippo]

3/5

You're skinflint!