BTNFieryKnightImprovedShading

[Moderator]

07:22, 23rd May 2009
zombie2279: It's not bad. The main object is a bit random and the sword is rather misshaped. Fix the sword and replace some parts of the shading with more colors preferably.

14:44, 27th May 2009

Further shading improvements are needed and the blade is still lacking.
Rejected until updated.

 

[AbstractCreativity]

Oh, now I noticed it lacks a certain amount of shading. Will get straight to it, and upload an update ASAP.

EDIT:
Ok, updated a more shaded version. And by the way, it doesn't look as grainy in-game.

 

[dimitri231]

Not warcraft style

 

[Slaydon]

IT would be better withouth those black border on the object, just the glow.

 

[Fire and Ice]

Is it just me, of is that guy's head a block of ... I've no idea what. Flesh out the sword a little cause no one can see it. The icon doesn't exactly look fiery, more of a dark, sinister aura. And the knight's pose is not exactly realistic. Overall the icon needs more detail.
BTW its spelt 'mercilessly'.

 

[Slaydon]

Looks like a sandbag with a sword

 

[Fire and Ice]

Looks like a sandbag with a sword

BWAHAHAHAHA! I LIKE that description! Though the sword is almost non-existent for that matter.

 

[Dentothor]

Looks like a sandbag with a sword

it really does. if you want to make the icon better you have to add a bit more straightness to the helm and not make it look like it wrinkles when it bends. a helm isnt even supposed to bend so the curve to the helm is not good at all. the sword is also incredibly akward cause it looks like a mishapen cartoon lightning bolt. the shading is well done but it looks a tad too sudden. the glow is also a bit too sudden. just work on this. it needs quite a bit.

2/5 for now

 

[Slaydon]

Try make the head like this:

 

[Dentothor]

ooh that gives me an idea for a new icon! ty slaydon

 

[Fire and Ice]

if you want to make the icon better you have to add a bit more straightness to the helm and not make it look like it wrinkles when it bends. a helm isnt even supposed to bend so the curve to the helm is not good at all.

AND make the helm a little smaller, that'll do.

 

[Zombie]

Further shading improvements are needed and the blade is still lacking.