Btnecslam

[Moderator]

17:21, 25th Aug 2010
enjoy: Looks like some smudge abuse here. The anatomy of the hand is very wrong. Fingers are too round and so. I suggest that you look at some tutorials about anatomy. And then after that, you should look at some realism tutorials. They really help alot

Rejected until updated.

 

[LunarDeath]

The hand looks a little squished and the hand guard could use some more definition.

 

[Just_Spectating]

very cartoony.

and not very realistic


looks like megaman's hand or something

 

[crimson fire]

its to cartoonish :/

 

[darkdeathknight]

Try to look at your own hand and base it off that...Unless youre a manbearpig or something.

 

[Hemske]

The effect/"slam" looks kind of nice, but the hand looks very... odd and cartoony.

 

[Don-Para-]

Knuckles should be a bit more defined.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Shading, and shaping needed in here. Also, some color variations won't hurt.