BTNDemonseal

[Moderator]

15:18, 10th Aug 2012
Apheraz Lucent: Approved, but consider to make improvements with some changes others suggested.

 

[Hemske]

Big image for whomever interested. It is (now) supposed to be an holy being put in a bag and sealed away by demons and the likes.

spoiler

 

[Codric]

Could prove to be usfull
I like it.
I looks more like a leather pouch that a demon seal but I get the concept.
I will rate this 4/5 and +rep

 

[JollyD]

could be enlarged, becouse it does not looks nice on small image

 

[Amargaard]

This is pretty useful, but honestly it could use a lot of improvement (In my opinion of course)

The bag and the chains doesn't look like they could contain a demon at all, they look puny and like they are easily broken. If I were to get a demon frightened, I would bring strong shining, perhaps golden, holy chains, and a bag that looks more important and magically than this - the japanese letter is cool, but it is not enough in my opinion. The bag should be made of white silk, with a golden letter instead or something like that.

The lights are coming from the bag, and the darkness is around it, giving the feeling that the demon in the bag is the holy one, imprisoned by dark forces around it. If you ask me, these colors should be reversed, with lights surrounding the bag and (as I wrote before) shining golden chains, and a bag that looks holy too, but with an unholy darkness coming from it

Just ideas if you're up for reaching a better quality. Once again, this is just my opinion, and please understand that this is constructive criticism. So far I'd give it a 3/5 score

 

[Narandza]

Big image is nice, small one however isn't. 4/5 +rep

 

[JollyD]

Big image is nice, small one however isn't. 4/5 +rep

Icon section is not so simple as common think about, you need to make big images fitting to small size of 64x64 pixels of final icon. This is the matter of practice.

 

[Hemske]

This is pretty useful, but honestly it could use a lot of improvement (In my opinion of course)

The bag and the chains doesn't look like they could contain a demon at all, they look puny and like they are easily broken. If I were to get a demon frightened, I would bring strong shining, perhaps golden, holy chains, and a bag that looks more important and magically than this - the japanese letter is cool, but it is not enough in my opinion. The bag should be made of white silk, with a golden letter instead or something like that.

The lights are coming from the bag, and the darkness is around it, giving the feeling that the demon in the bag is the holy one, imprisoned by dark forces around it. If you ask me, these colors should be reversed, with lights surrounding the bag and (as I wrote before) shining golden chains, and a bag that looks holy too, but with an unholy darkness coming from it

Just ideas if you're up for reaching a better quality. Once again, this is just my opinion, and please understand that this is constructive criticism. So far I'd give it a 3/5 score

Ooh I definitely see your points. It actually look more like a holy being trapped by demons rather than the reverse. But I could just change the name for that instead
And about the chains, well originally I wanted to add talismans and some magic glow to them, to make it look like they really are strong/enchanted enough to hold back a demon within a bag, though when I tried some different variations it mostly looked quite clutterish and became a bit too much detail for the icon. I could make it look even better in the big one, but the small one would suffer too much.

Thanks for such an elaborate opinion!

@you others, I'll try to make it a bit bigger, lets see how it turns out.

 

[JollyD]

Ooh I definitely see your points. It actually look more like a holy being trapped by demons rather than the reverse. But I could just change the name for that instead
And about the chains, well originally I wanted to add talismans and some magic glow to them, to make it look like they really are strong/enchanted enough to hold back a demon within a bag, though when I tried some different variations it mostly looked quite clutterish and became a bit too much detail for the icon. I could make it look even better in the big one, but the small one would suffer too much.

Thanks for such an elaborate opinion!

@you others, I'll try to make it a bit bigger, lets see how it turns out.

Edit: new:

old:

I think the bigger one look better actually, I'll update this one later today.

If you enlarge picture and make strong lines - small image of icon would be better for sure

 

[Hemske]

Made everything bigger and fixed the bag looking a bit "solid" at the furthest top of it.

 

[Panda]

Looks approvable now, great job

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Put light on the bag and add a little stronger shadows on it, and I'm approving it. Neat idea.

 

[KaplanHorus]

Nice
4/5 + rep

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Any update progress?

 

[Hemske]

Well, Im a busy person D: Ill try get it updated until the weekend has passed though.

 

[Cakedog345]

Great !

 

[Sunreaver]

The seal is actually death in chinese great job