BTNDemonicSpawn

[Moderator]

22:37, 26th Sep 2009
Zombie.: This is actually a very good idea, but the execution is way too lacking. The proportions of the person are messed up on the man, the injury's blood effect need a better color scheme, preferably add more emphasis on detailing the flesh and the guts. Above all, the demon needs something to make it recognisable, proper, more evil-looking red-black demonic claws, preferably making them larger and with a better shading as an addition. Either way, this won't get approved unless the demon is given more work.

5th Oct 2009
Zombie: No changes made, rejected until updated.

 

[Iyzz_Fryzz]

WiPs

 

[Dmazzz]

GJ, i suggest having 2 glowing eyes in the middle of the thing^^ 4/5!

 

[Wraithling]

The WIPs are nice (esp. the 3rd), but when you convert it into the icon it seems to lose so much detail, for example the unclear torso shape. And I thought the blood and hands is actually a red scorpion

May I suggest a little more work on both torso and hands, plus zoom out a bit so I can see more. Good idea anyway.

 

[NFWar]

You finished it! Looks... BLOODY!
Good Job!

GJ, i suggest having 2 glowing eyes in the middle of the thing^^ 4/5!

Damn nice and scary idea!

 

[TheHunterKiller]

Blurry, but i think it looks fine.

 

[Iyzz_Fryzz]

You finished it! Looks... BLOODY!
Good Job!!

yup, but i removed the rib because it ruins the hand

 

[PsychoNerdial]

Thought it was a lobster at first xD

 

[NFWar]

if people see scorpions and lobsters, than hand must have color combined by red and dark one. It cud be good change.

 

[Dj0z]

Lol nice WIPs, as people said, but when resized, the detail loss is too big.
Not to mention in W3, it's gonna be even worse.

I think a simple zoom in (ye sorry lol ) would do, and exagerating the bright red colors that we can see in the last WIP. point is to force it to show on the resized icon.

When you've managed to do that, this is icon is gonna be full win.

 

[The Panda]

I would make them hands coming out of it. Make them more like hands instead of plain red hands.

 

[Deuterium]

Great, but needs more bit more details and contrast... to make the chest and the demon two seperate entities of the icon... right now, you can't know directly that it's a chest...

 

[Iyzz_Fryzz]

Update

● Changed the hand color
● Added more blood

 

[Dj0z]

Looks much better now, even though the detail loss makes me wanna rather import the WIP :x ..

 

[The Panda]

Looks better, now maybe add some blood drips since his whole chest is exploded.