BTNCrystalShardsRain

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I3lackDeath Awaiting Update [tr]

Date: 2013/Mar/01 15:56:57 Reasons: Commented.​ ​ ​ Staff Contact Submission Rules

 

[EmoBrother]

Do something on its background

It will be better if you do something on its background

 

[Faith]

The crystal part doesn't seem very evident.
When I first looked at this I thought of some sort of slash.

Perhaps you could touch up a little on that, maybe make one or two of them larger?

 

[stonneash]

______________Update________________
Full Remake with better shading, coloring and flowers( JK )

 

[Faith]

I definitely like this one better. It looks like it's raining skyscrapers though haha!

Anywho, I like it. 4/5

 

[I3lackDeath]

All your shard icons really need definition.
Work with highlights and shading, don't just apply it for the hell of it. Make them your tool.
Emphasize the sharp edges of crystals with brighter shades of a colour etc.
These are two great tutorials for this kind of thing:

Tutorial 1
Tutorial 2​

 

[stonneash]

All your shard icons really need definition.
Work with highlights and shading, don't just apply it for the hell of it. Make them your tool.
Emphasize the sharp edges of crystals with brighter shades of a colour etc.
These are two great tutorials for this kind of thing:

Tutorial 1
Tutorial 2​

Really nice tutorials (i couldn't do the second) and will be helpful so much for my future ice icons, but as you can see from the title am trying yo get crystals, not ice

 

[I3lackDeath]

(...) but as you can see from the title am trying yo get crystals, not ice

The techniques are the same, aswell as the looks...