BTNChestBurning11

[Moderator]

01:10, 5th Jan 2014
Kimbo: Although I agree generally with the comments below, I think regardless this still looks like a nice icon and the style is well done. It looks great when compressed as an icon and I can see many uses for this. approved.

 

[Anderhil]

Doesn't look very good in the normal size... BUT when converted to the icon size, its really useful and nice. can be used for an undead buff or smth...

 

[Skipper]

The shape of the chest looks very bad. Also the fire isn´t very good. Try to remake it.

2/5 - Lacking

Hint --->

This is How It should look like

 

[darkdeathknight]

Yeah it's hard to see the 'fire'
Probably if you want it burning maybe you need some charred bone parts?

 

[Skypsi]

it's hard too understand what is going on and why, what is the need for a burning chest (a burning skull or weapon has more meaning. this has the same meaning as a burning thigh bone, none its just totally random object), surely a debuff? perhaps show a ball of fire inside (implying pain) or imply that its the inner fire of undead if it's for a buff, and have it looking like an aura around the entire unit (ie the Skull, shoulders bones and ribs as a minimum with flames coming off them). The pose looks like its been copied directly from a biology text book giving it no real impact.

 

[Destination9747]

I could show the shoulders but I should make it smaller, and It can be small. I try to fix the problem.
In fact in the real which I did draw, I showed the shoulders.