BTNbow

[Moderator]

19:23, 12th Dec 2013
Kimbo: Hi Hadeis, can you please make the glow less erratic and smudgy? Make it more like a glow, in where it is smooth and cleaner, and aswell add some more shading to the crossbow. Atm it is abit too messy, the composition and perspective is there, it just needs some improvement. I will give you about a week to update it.

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Try to practice more with shadows, light sources, and mostly, with textures.

Even if it's a white crossbow, it still needs wood grains or metal reflections. Even plastic, bones, silk and wool reflect light, each in it's own unique way.
Having a textureless weapon and dramatic shading with no highlights will result in deforming shape and quite unrealistic/cartoonish effects, which both fit in Warcraft universe.

Left half of the string is missing, and the whole icon lacks any eyecandies and details - fairly monotone and plain. The effect on the background is plain as well, having no color variations, and (again) shadows/lights.

 

[Ginufe]

Looks more like a Crossbow to me