Bob's adventure

[Moderator]

11:36, 28th Aug 2010
ap0calypse: Rejected

 

[-Kobas-]

Please fix -> Type:None

 

[Darkzealot_128]

Gonna check this. And if it's a campaign then why is it still a frozen throne map?

Edit: Ok, this 'campaign' has bad terrain, is boring, unbalanced abilities, hardly any work put into this, and I can't really call this a campaign.. I will just vote for rejection.

 

[light bolt30]

This is your first description as well I believe? You need to expand it more, use colours and tables, etc. Here's a list of BB Codes to help you. How can this be a campaign with only one map? There should be 3 or more to make a proper campaign.

 

[phoenixfire]

Unlike the preceeding comments, I will give a rating and offer you help in your mapmaking.

Since this is your first map, I will use the scale 1 to 5, 1 being a horrible, unplayable person's first map, and 5 being some talented person's whos probably had experience in another editor.

BEFORE OPENING IN WORLD EDITOR:
Terrain: 3/5 Better then most first-time maps
Spells: 1/5 I understand you don't know how to make custom spells, but you should elaborate on how he actually got one, this also ties in with
Plot/Lore: 0/5 There isn't any

AFTER OPENING IN WORLD EDITOR:

Trigger: 4/5 Most first time mapmakers can't even make one simple trigger...
Imports: 5/5 I just threw this out there cause when I made my first map, I didn't know how to import...

Total: 13/25 Not bad for a first time map.

However on a regular scale it would be 0-1/5

I have voted for rejection since the game isn't really playable. "noburst" if you want, I can help you learn how to mapmake


Also it isn't a campaign.

 

[Crave.]

credid goes to kitabite for most of the armour, the templar helm was made by ikillforeyou
and the breastplate was made by sunchips

English is the key to success Sorta...

Credit goes to kitabatake for most of the armour, the templar helm by ikillforeyou and the breastplate by Sunchips

Also, dont tell us about how this is your first map, I worked very hard yadda yadda. Tell us about the MAP.