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Moderator · Oct 22, 2010

23:42, 25th Jun 2011
-Kobas-:
Status: Rejected
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yeohxin · Oct 22, 2010

This is my First released map. Hope everyone can give some suggestion.

Thanks.

light bolt30 · Oct 22, 2010

Remove the excess BB Code from the description; found in terrain screenshots tab.

Darkzealot_128 · Oct 22, 2010

Wow this looks impressivle. Gonna check.

Bad terrain, bad gameplay, not much work put into it, I get one shot by my enemies and am useless and have to just watch what happens, leaks, so many reasons for rejection.

Edit: Yeah sorry for no suggestions.

Suggestions: Get a terrainer, make units spawn and automatically move to the other side, balance the units, make heros just as strong as the opposition team, make it so you can pick your heros, post screenshots, remove the leaks (http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/general-mapping-tutorials-278/complete-list-things-leak-126761/), make the map less boring, make some disadvantages of dieing (like gold loss), and just play it and test it yourself.

yeohxin · Oct 22, 2010

@Darkzealot: So if you can says out so many reason for rejection, why don't you give me suggestion on how to improve it?

Eldubs · Oct 22, 2010

First of all, make the screenshots. That made me not to dl when i saw there was no screenies. Screenies make people dl maps.

And what about yor war of the lich king project?

yeohxin · Oct 22, 2010

@Eldubs: Thanks for reply. Screenshoot will be added but I don't know how to capture it

and the WotLK mpa is currently on DeftheLynn's hand to improve terrain.

Eldubs · Oct 22, 2010

Ok, here is a guide for you.

#1 Ingame, press the keyboard button (Prt Scr SysRq).
#2 Open Paint
#3 Press Ctrl + V
#4 Save picture
#5 Add picture to hiveworkshop albums (in your profile)
#6 Copy the link with the pictur in your album
#7 Paste the link in this kind of bbcode (

)
#8 Rep the helpfull guy : )

yeohxin · Oct 22, 2010

Thanks about it!
So did you test this map? If yes, give me some feedback

Edit: 27 download but onone want to give suggestion?

Eldubs · Oct 22, 2010

Il download it but i dont promise people will stay to the end. If i can il give feedback.

Edit:

#1: Much Lag
#2: Too imba enemy units
#3: Skills useless
#4: if you make arrows so slow, you might aswell make them not follow you
#5: Too hard
#6: Terrain nothing special, but who am i to say? I suck at terrain

My review is 1/5 Rejected untill improved.

Marcin013 · Oct 22, 2010

Not bad Map
Vote:3

Darkzealot_128 · Oct 22, 2010

A 3? Please explain. o.o

Evillizard · Oct 23, 2010

I don't see the point, all I can do is try to get past the enemy units but if atleast 4 arrows start chasing me i have to start over, terrain needs a lot of work and you need to make the units a lot weaker. I would also try to make a 1st persion camera, the lock camera thing is really just annoying.

yeohxin · Oct 23, 2010

@Marcin013: Thanks

@Evillizard: Actually the hero is to fight at back of ally creep and AVOID ENGAGING enemy creep. And the creep is made to be stronger because the gameflow is as below:
Epic fight at middle -->
winner's side continues fight toward enemy's base -->
breaking enemy's main building -->
End
So in order to make this game more challenging and longer, the creep is made to be stronger.

Eldubs · Oct 23, 2010

yeohxin said:
@Marcin013: Thanks
@Evillizard: Actually the hero is to fight at back of ally creep and AVOID ENGAGING enemy creep. And the creep is made to be stronger because the gameflow is as below:
Epic fight at middle -->
winner's side continues fight toward enemy's base -->
breaking enemy's main building -->
End
So in order to make this game more challenging and longer, the creep is made to be stronger.

Your creeps are too strong!!! You need to hit them exactly 250 times to kill them! And you dong the the opportunity as your projectiles do not follow the target. This map need to be updated!

And still no screenies altho all wants them and i explained to you how to put them!

yeohxin · Oct 23, 2010

Map Updated

Changelog:
*All creep's damage reduced
*All creep's Hp reduced by 60%
*Reworked the terrain.
*Added lively doodad into the map(made by Happycockroach )

yeohxin · Oct 25, 2010

Marcin013 · Oct 26, 2010

Some better version
Vote:3+

Still bugs

yeohxin · Oct 27, 2010

@Marcin013: What's the bug? If you no tell me I can't fix it.

Edit:Bump

Marcin013 · Oct 27, 2010

Bug:The ally units attack me ?

Sorry for me English Im Polish.

Arisato · Oct 28, 2010

sounds interesting, and it is cool, CHANGE THE NAME ! Tooo plain, i'll give 3/5, change the name !

yeohxin · Oct 28, 2010

@Marcin013: Emm, not get what you say. You mean your ally attack you?
or did you mistake and see an enemy as an ally? Please tell me more about it. Thx

@Izanagi: Thx for comment and rate. About the name, may I can get some idea from you? How about " The final Battle" or "The Decisive War of Fate"?

Eldubs · Oct 29, 2010

Battle of The Sacred Land (BotSL)

Marcin013 · Oct 29, 2010

Only 1 Hero.
Made a taraven to choose heros

Sorry for me English Im Polish.

Eldubs · Oct 29, 2010

Good example for that is google translator. Altho i dont support it but it can still help you.

Arisato · Oct 29, 2010

HOLY LEAKS!!!!

(( rejection!! is a MUST beta goes to the Map Projects....
this map section is NOT for beta testing maps (right???)(correct me if i'm wrong..?)
-.- i know how it feels

but this map.. fix leaks and i'll raise it back from 2/5 to 3/5

change the name to ..???
The Battle of the Damned

yeohxin · Oct 29, 2010

@Elbubs: Thanks for suggesting. I'ill take that

@Izanagi: This is not a Beta testing map. It is playable ant still in developing.

So you says its Holy Leaks? Where is it? Tell me so that I can fix it

Eldubs · Oct 29, 2010

There is a total list of triggers that leak somewhere on the site.

Arisato · Nov 2, 2010

i'll raise the rating after you fix the leaks, yes it is playable, but LAGGY playable

yeohxin · Nov 4, 2010

@Izanagi: Ya, its laggy, but in next update I'd make some change hope it wont lag anymore. And in next update a hero selection sys will be added. :

defskull · Nov 5, 2010

Need any help on cleaning leaks ?

Ironside · Jun 25, 2011

Review by Ironside
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Positive features:

Negative features:

- No quest menu
- No leader / multi board
- You just die in like 4 attacks, it's pointless
- Text spam all the time

Additional Information / Conclusion:

This map needs a lot of work in order to be approved.

Rating: 1/5
Vote for: Rejected

yeohxin · Jun 29, 2011

Okey, thanks for your review. This is totally a fail, I will upload better map next time.

----------	Yeohxin Presents	----------
	The Battlefield vBeta Created by yeohxin Map Info: This map is basically focus on usage of hero. Every player owns a hero, which is used to aid his side in the fight between the Human's last Hope and Undead's Invasion. The most challenging part of this map is the Engage of creep. When your hero fights, sometimes you will engage creeps and cause them to fight you. Will you help your alliance to win the battle, or lose it? Features: This map featured Unique Camera System to provide much stimulating battle experience. This map also featured an Simple Revive system and contain some triggered spell. Flood's Camera System Ms Simple Revive System Some Triggered Spel Screenshots: Image Description: Loading Screen Image Description: Human Base Overview Image Description: Undead Base Overview Image Description: Gameplay (2 pictures) Image Description: Battlefield (3 different views) Change Log: First release! * Reworked Terrain. * Added Screenshoot. * Rebalanced creep's Hp and Damage scaled to 40% of previous version's. * Made new unit Mage - Can heal and cast supportive spell. * Reduced Creep's Hp to 880(Melee), 440(Range), 220(Mage) * Made a Creep Spawn Sys. Which spawn 5 melee 3 range 2 mage every 70 seconds. * Reduced Mp per Int point from 20/1 to 4.5/1 * Reduced Mp regen per Int point to 0.1/1 * Changed range creep's projectile model for both side * Changed range creep's projectile speed * Reduced all creep's movement speed to 180 * Human melee creep's model changed to an imported one * Human range creep's model changed to an imported one * Reduced Shaman's "Flaming Will"'s AoE from 600/800 to 300/400 * Redone some Gloom's placement * Made a vortex area at bottom of human's territory * Changed Undead base's gloom color from Green to Dark Green * Changed weather effect from Ashenvale heavy rain to light rain. * Redone some terrain Credits: Special Thanks: Flood for his Camera System Tjordell for aiding me on the trigger part Fan for his Wolf Model -Kobas- for his map description template Happycockroach for his animated doodads. I cannot recognize who made the SoC Resource Pack so if you make it or you knows who make it please tell me : Author's notes: This map is my first map which considered playable. But this map is my 2nd made map(1st War for the Lich King but incomplete yet). This map is made during my free time and this is just a Beta version. Balancing haven't done yet. If you find any bug or suggestion please tell me.

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